Review 13

the Zogg 7/15/12. chapter 13 This chapter, while amusing, was mostly filler. Especially the new Sola-Shinji being creepy scene. The most important part of this episode was Kirei pinning his dad's death on Kariya. That will cause some spark's to fly. And Rider and Waver had an excellent heart to heart. gurren Lagann will only get stronger from that

But the Saber-Deadpool fight was hilarious and the second best fight in this fic next to the Caster-Berserker fight. Deadpool sure know's how to piss people off. And Kirei's new personality was funny yet somewhat badass. I'd suggest that you cut down on his swearing, however. You don't want to make him to different and alienate your fans.

Next, I'd like to point out some consistant grammar error's. Since my grammar sucks as well I didn't say anything. But these three errors are really consistant and are getting to me.

'Cannon' should be 'canon'. no uppercase letter and no second 'n'.

'Of coarse' should be 'of course'. no 'a' replace it with 'u'.

And common should be 'come on' you can't combine the two words.