In Memoriam

In Memoriam
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 * Critique Review.
 * It's basically a re-write of the original in a first person pov removing all the illogical stupidities and altering some details.
 * Magic Explanations.
 * Ruiko Pov.
 * Boring shit.
 * Touma Pov
 * Love the realistic conversations.
 * Index actually convinces Touma with reason and not irritation.
 * Note: Index met Maika a few chapters/a day before.
 * Index offers Touma lunch for gratitude of his kindness. All hell breaks loose.
 * Her food is actually good :)
 * Meeting the fire man. English and negotiations(threats.)
 * Actually friends with Index. (For now.)
 * Touma, meet Stephen Magnus, Index's guardian. For a lack of a better term (Jailer.)
 * Masks are removed. As Fireman pulls a (Gun?)
 * Touma uses the city technology/rules to his advantage by making Magnus draw his gun in the presence of a robot.(Yes they have robots.)
 * Magnus starts using fire magic. (PS, Me thinks he's australian, but he came from England, so what do I know?)
 * Comparison is outstanding!
 * Fire teleportation? Oh come on! How unfair is that!
 * Hit and run. Direct power negation is pretty flippin awesome!
 * Misaka Misuzu pov.
 * Academy City brought Japan's economy back to life, and has kept it going for the past 25 years. But can the good times last forever?
 * Another boring shit.
 * Ruiko impatient pov
 * Uninteresting.
 * This page has a didactic feel to it. Unquote.